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History Today Marks The End

Discussion in 'The Hokey Ass Message Board' started by NoSurf, Jul 24, 2008.

  1. NoSurf
    Joined: Jul 26, 2002
    Posts: 4,879

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    Today marks the end
    An end of a piece of automotive history
    The old rural car repair shop.

    As you roll along
    Nothing marks the distinction between it
    and all the other homes nestled on the prairie.
    This was a place that our beloved deco gas stations
    Wiped off the map.

    The old squat tin shed, faded and speckled with rust.
    The low rows of small windows
    Sliding doors blocked by overgrown trees
    The branches rubbing the roof in long smooth arcs
    The tin bangs and shouts with the wind.

    Inside the cracks and scars in the concrete floor,
    Poured in hand mixed batches,
    Hatched like the back of the old mans hand.
    Tools and grease guns hang on racks
    Rows of fan belts
    stacks of radiator hose
    boxes of welding rod
    drawers full of…just stuff.
    Old wrenches lay unused
    and displays faded and torn.

    As you glance around,
    Your mind wanders and wonders
    What was it like back then?
    Back when all these empty spaces
    Were filled with model T’s, model A’s
    Chevy sixes and flathead Fords.
    How many engines were coaxed back to life here?
    The blue flash of the arc welder,
    The sparks and slag dancing on the unswept floor.

    You look in a dark and dusty corner
    What’s that? A wisp of smoke?
    You smell the Cuban select.
    Then you see him
    The old man
    Cigar in his mouth
    Wiping his greasy hands on an old rag
    You see the warmth in his crisp blue eyes
    “what do we got here?” he asks.

    All gone.

    Today the automotive karma will be released
    Back into the ether.
    Memories freed. Knowledge long lost.

    So tonight, when it is darkest, and quietest and still
    Think of the old place.
    All the vehicles that came to this dusty oasis
    To be fixed, patched up, back on the road again.

    Leave your shop window open a crack
    Or a toolbox drawer slightly open.
    So the memories and knowledge
    That doesn’t get written down in books
    Seeps in and continues
    To live on.
     
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  2. Fif-t-3
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    from Edmond, Ok

    That is very nice. Thank you.
     
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  3. moonlight graham
    Joined: Apr 17, 2007
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    from wyo

    Sir,

    If you don't currently write professionaly, you should. Thanks for the story and the goose bumps.
     
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  4. 37FABRICATION
    Joined: Apr 4, 2007
    Posts: 672

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    They will always live on in our shop...
     
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  5. VERNOR-GREEN GARAGE
    Joined: Jan 24, 2006
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    VERNOR-GREEN GARAGE
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    from Michigan

    I refuse to let anything old p*** away my window is always open !
     
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  6. Nice Jay!
     
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  7. 1950ChevySuburban
    Joined: Dec 20, 2006
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    1950ChevySuburban
    Member Emeritus
    from Tucson AZ

    Thanks for taking us back there with you. I got chills.
     
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  8. 6t5frlane
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    from New York

    Very well said nosurf...........poetry!
     
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  9. Jalopy Jim
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    Very nice
    Unfortuneatly it applies to lot more than Auto repair.

    Jim H
     
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  10. Roothawg
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    I heart Jay...He's dreamy.
     
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  11. Petejoe
    Joined: Nov 27, 2002
    Posts: 12,638

    Petejoe
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    from Zoar, Ohio

    Great piece No-Surf!
    Its like a release isn't it?
    All bent up longing to enter the light.
    Once released our souls become free..eager to cling to the next romance.
    It allows us to share our memories..for when we are gone, no one can enter that shop or dusty old corridor. The doors and windows will truely be closed forever.
     
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  12. TERPU
    Joined: Jan 2, 2004
    Posts: 2,504

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    Great writing, but as for me I'm still fighting the good fight and I think you'll find alot of others are as well. The honesty and knowledge is still around. But for sure it's alot harder to find, we just have to keep looking for it and supporting it.


    Thanks,
    Tim
     
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  13. general gow
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    Posts: 6,472

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    dude, the hair on the back of my neck is standing up!

    i never saw the place and i am going to miss it.

    i'll leave that drawer open just a smidge...
     
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  14. Boyd Who
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    Wow. Can't think of anything that sums it up better. Just...wow.
     
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  15. custom50
    Joined: Dec 29, 2007
    Posts: 396

    custom50
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    from Indiana

    I think there could still be life in the old building unless it's been torn down already.
    I would be proud of it sitting on my wooded acreage in the country a little work, and it would look pretty good.
    I'm crazy about old barns and old buildings like this.
     
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  16. Retrorod
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    Sad, but true.

    I'd say that's a good bit of writing!
     
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  17. thanks for a great story/history lesson....reminds me of a lotta places I saw along old rt 66.........
     
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  18. fiat128
    Joined: Jun 26, 2006
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    fiat128
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    from El Paso TX

    Nice!
     
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  19. beverlyhillbilly
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    beverlyhillbilly
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    Very, Very Good! Thanks for posting..
     
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  20. general gow
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    general gow
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    there could be life left. but there isnt. it's coming down no matter what. i think the poem is an homage to an old building that has done it's job. i wish i could have saved it though, or someone anyway.
     
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  21. 60'shotrod
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    60'shotrod
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    Stunning!
     
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  22. junkyardroad
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    junkyardroad
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    from Colorado

    I bet you could finally get laid now that you write poetry.
     
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  23. Nicely said Nosurf. As we go through the short journey of life we should take plenty of photos for the memories. Sometimes that's all we can go back to>>>>.
     
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  24. "So tonight, when it is darkest, and quietest and still
    Think of the old place.
    All the vehicles that came to this dusty oasis
    To be fixed, patched up, back on the road again.

    Leave your shop window open a crack
    Or a toolbox drawer slightly open.
    So the memories and knowledge
    That doesn’t get written down in books
    Seeps in and continues
    To live on."


    it is amazing to me how humanity throws stuff like this away or thinks it knows a better way and just pushes aside the very thread of its heritage. My tool box is ALWAYS open...and when I'm in my garage, my hands are ALWAYS dirty and my face ALWAYS has a smile on it...because my hands are dirty and they get that way doing what I love to do. You have a great way of capturing what we all know...thanks for putting it in words.
     
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  25. it brought back Memories of a Time when every thing was Good and Honest <br> People use to Kid around & Laugh, Thanks
     
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  26. 3wLarry
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    3wLarry
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    from Owasso, Ok

    ...I didn't know your last name was Longfellow...:)
     
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  27. 53chevy
    Joined: Mar 5, 2001
    Posts: 1,570

    53chevy
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    Great Essay/Poem writting....Thanks!!!! I'll leave the drawer open, maybe my missing tools will return as well!

    Ken
     
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  28. 29bowtie
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    29bowtie
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    Very inspirational writing.:D
     
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  29. Tuck
    Joined: May 14, 2001
    Posts: 5,873

    Tuck
    Tech Editor
    from MINNESOTA

    dude.. RAD. Very nice-
    I wish I was hanging with you guys this weekend-
    word.

    Tuck
     
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  30. wow! that was great and depressing all at the same time.. that was great man!
     
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