Pinstriping

I just started pinstriping less than a month ago and would like to get some peoples opinions on what i've done so far. These are teh first 3 panels i've done so im open to any advice available.

Fred
Salvation Tattoo

 

You might want to post this on the main board(Hokey *** Message Board). You'll get more responses. This is for questions about the board. Oh - and the lines look pretty good too.

 

Sorry i thought it was a general Q&A section. Thanks