Very nice explanation of KK...glad you explained Von Dutch as you did...you should do well with this paper. FWIW, I did find a few typos...perhaps you had to type all this onto the HAMB instead of pasting it on electronically? R-
If I can make a suggestion...I think you might hit your target image closer if your "bomber" reference at the beginning mentioned a B-17 or B-24 as opposed to a B-52. Just about every -17 or -24 I've ever seen had some sort of nose art, and I think a lot of people associate nose art/pin-ups with the WWII era. Other than that, the piece sounds really good!