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I only got sixty years on this planet.....

Discussion in 'The Hokey Ass Message Board' started by Honest, Nov 28, 2003.

  1. Honest
    Joined: Mar 2, 2001
    Posts: 159

    Honest
    Member
    from Dallas Tx

    Piled in three high stacks
    Multi colored mountains with eye poking chrome
    Leaning all diffrent directions
    Await your false move
    Three thousand pound hammers of doom

    Sounds of flies buzzing, mexican music fills the air
    Broken glass, puddles of oil, nintey weight smells
    Carnival flavor, one dollar to enter..fun as a county fair.

    All have a story ..too fast at a corner.
    Too late and too much beer?
    Photos of familys, Bibles, whiskey bottles and fast food bags
    Magazines with titles like Juggs...Fat chicks with hot bods

    Prizes await those who search under these hoods
    All kina things...to build our hot rods
    A race to beat the crusher
    A race to find that part
    A wrench and a dollar..
    is all it takes to start

    Careful where you reach..sharp edges covered in filth
    Spiders and snakes..bugs that sting and fly
    A bumper jack holds up the beast
    Hoods propped like bear traps
    This place can kill a guy

    The coach is out front
    Burritos on sale...three for a dollar
    Only the brave get red sauce on the side
    They said they were beef.....
    But I think they lied.
    LFFG
    HC





     
  2. Nice poem man, wheres that loot? [​IMG]
     
  3. flt-blk
    Joined: Jun 25, 2002
    Posts: 4,941

    flt-blk
    Member
    from IL

    Nice Poem,
    You been painting without a mask again??
    TZ
     
  4. Rocky
    Joined: Mar 3, 2001
    Posts: 17,617

    Rocky
    Classified Editor

    Back slowly away from the keyboard, Charley
     
  5. Sailor
    Joined: Mar 3, 2001
    Posts: 824

    Sailor
    Member

    So the poet is writing again, huh? Nice.
     
  6. warpigg
    Joined: Mar 4, 2001
    Posts: 591

    warpigg
    Member
    from gypsy

    knowbody writes poems anymore
     
  7. Skate Fink
    Joined: Jul 31, 2001
    Posts: 3,472

    Skate Fink
    Member Emeritus

    ........you been hangin' with GERM???? [​IMG]
     
  8. Nice one Honest.

    Haven't seen an Honest bit of prose for a while.
    You are an artist with words....
     
  9. quickrod
    Joined: Nov 5, 2003
    Posts: 394

    quickrod
    Member

    honest,kool poem and all,but you gotta remember its puff puff pass,not puff puff puff puff puff.........puff.
     
  10. Johnny Ace
    Joined: Jul 20, 2002
    Posts: 2,200

    Johnny Ace
    Member

    Hey Honest Chollie...thanks for the kool nitecap!
    Try to hear what HC done laid on ya, only use Billy G's voice from "Heaven,Hell,or Houston"...musical background: "GraveyardII" by the Butthole Surfers....
    HC is the word unto his own self...Germ is an entity unto his own,as well......Glad to be able to enjoy dem both....
     
  11. Bass
    Joined: Jul 9, 2001
    Posts: 3,368

    Bass
    Member
    from Dallas, TX

    Honest Charley is my hero.

    Some of you guys should try not being so close-minded.
     
  12. At least these poems are more readable than Germ's whatevers...??? [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
  13. Elrod
    Joined: Aug 7, 2002
    Posts: 3,566

    Elrod
    Member

    Great poem man! Was that inspired by a recent find?
     

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