Tattoo Help

I figured I would give this a shot since I have seen the art work some of you post on here (amazing).

If one of you had some spare time could you clean up and add some touches to this prospective tattoo. I really like the old sailor style stuff (I guess I like more modern versions of older tattoos. I tried fro a while and this is the best I could do.

Thanks for trying, I appreciate it. There is a higher resolution link at the bottom. Oh I almost forgot it is a tattoo about my newborn son who's name is Keaton Ray and we call him Key



http://www.designrodeo.com/temp/key_hires.zip